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Terrorisim In 3D 4k ULTRA HD
Drigg
2018/07/27
(Fri)
16:12:02
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This is my first story in a very very long time. I have had the idea for ages but I just never got round to putting pen to paper.
Writing isn't really my strongest point but I've been inspired and motivated recently to see what I can do.
This is part 1 to maybe 3 or 4. If people like it I will continue, especially seeing as I kinda have part 2 generally blocked out already.
Apologies in advanced if it either doesn't make sense or I repeat words/terms, or if my writing generally if a bit all over the place. I likely will repost an edited/improved version of part 1 with part 2 in the near future.
And of course, Feedback is much appreciated. Good and Bad. Hit me with what you honestly think. I generally want to improve.
In it's most basic form, the story is about a reporter being captured and executed by terrorists.
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Katie was dragged further by her captors. The Sack on her head preventing her from seeing anything after just getting out of the vehicle she was captured into.
It seemed like hours, but finally it was pulled off her head and she was hit by the bright light of the middle eastern sun, unable to shield her eyes with her hands due to them being bounded tightly.
One of the men came out of the truck and set up a very expensive looking camera in-front of her and jokingly turned to her saying "HD HD HD 4K 3D. People will see everything!"...and then briskly left.
Her curly red hair seemed to bounce each time she moved her head to look towards her captors and the hot outdoor environment, tied back so it wouldn’t get in the way of seeing the agony in her face and deep blue eyes. Her small but perky red lips trembled slightly at the thought of what is to come and slightly paler complexion was going to contrast perfectly with the blood that will pour from her body.
She tried to focus on what the men were saying. Being a reporter for one of the biggest news broadcasting networks in UK, and specialising in reporting developments in the middle east, the had taken the time to pick up the common languages there on a basic level.
What she heard and recognised made her shriek and scream for help.
“They…they’re going to kill me!?” She thought in a panic.
They started by striping her, tearing off her clothing against her struggles and screams until she was completely naked.
Her body was incredible, a flat stomach and well-toned back showed the world that she took pride in her fitness and appearance. Her tits were perky and nicely shaped, with nipples that seemed to take your attention.
As a red head, her skin was naturally paler…although she had developed a slight tan after reporting in a more tropical climate recently, shown by the developing tan lines around her naked body.
Despite being 24 she was quite petite, standing at around 5ft 6 inches and being around a B in chest size, but her training gave her hips and ass that perfect shape that women strive for.
She tried her best to conceal herself, but the masked captors forcefully chained her neck to a wall like an animal . She could move, but was limited to how far and how much…which is just what they wanted.
The men looked her up and down, while talking to each other in their language, and a look of fear rose in Katie’s face.
She pleaded with them, offering money, jewellery and other material things…but it failed.
One of the men crouched bedside her and pulled at her hair, raising her head up to face the camera and said the following…
“This a message to western world. If you happy for your media to spread lies about our country, then we respond with blood.”
Katie’s face frowned in despair once she heard that as clear as the skies in slightly broken English . She let out a useless shriek for help as she struggled against her restraints and her head being held.
“Now watch what happens to those who do not know their place and go against us” he continued towards the camera, drawing a knife and bringing it towards Katie’s throat.
She began to shake in panic and fear at the anticipation of having her throat sliced open and being bled to death.
The blade rested on her neck as she braced herself for the end of it all…but he pulled it away.
Katie opened her eyes and with a look of confusion locked eyes with her masked captor.
“No…to easy. To quick.” He said. As he got up and walked over off the camera.
Katie was left alone on screen with a look of further confusion. Looking over at the men as they debated with each other in their language once more…and then she saw it.
“No NO NOOOO!” she screamed, as the captor walked back into shot, holding an axe.
“And you pretty. We get few attractive women to kill. Only stupid men and very few stupid ugly women. Let’s make good example from of her.” He explains to her and the camera, as he suddenly slammed her axe down on her right leg at the knee.
Katie screams in agony and her body jerks as she watched through pained eyes as the axe sliced into the joint of her knee further and further with each blow.
“STOP PLEA-GAHHHHH!” She choked, as the axe fell once again.
It felt like an eternity until that last final swing of the axe went clean trough and hit the stone ground beneath. Cleanly severing and dismembering her limb, much to the joy of her captor. He grabbed the limb by the ankle and held it up to the camera for a few seconds, and then threw it into the bushes nearby.
She looked in horror at her leg flying through the air and being thrown away like a piece of meat. Then looking down at her fresh stump, twitching and the burning pain with a look of disbelief and shock. The feeling was unsettling, seeing something that should be there, that was part of her…now gone.
“And now, other one!” The captor shouted as he walked over to her left-hand side.
Katie’s eyes bulged and she grit her teeth as she saw him raise the axe once again. She instinctively tried to move her leg out the way, ended up with an axe to the shin. The weapon sliced into it and shattered the bone In two, making her leg bend at a sick angle.
A jolt of fresh pain blasted through her body, as she screamed once again at her broken leg. And again, as the axe fell once more.
The captor shouted in his language in frustration, repearing the words “Dull Dull Dull” and walked back off screen. Katie’s eyes followed him and she let out a pitiful sob after seeing him return with a Saw.
Once again, she tried to move her remaining limb, trying to scurry away and shift her body to avoid the inevitable, but it was no use.
She grit her teeth and tightly closed her eyes as the masked man began to brutally saw away at her knee joint. The blades ripping through her flesh and cartilage with a sickening grinding sound. Blood sprayed over the two of them once again as he got half way through.
The pain was too much, and Katie couldn’t hold in her screams any longer between her bared clenched teeth.
He continued to saw…back and forth, slicing further into the joint but growing frustrated once again with the time it took.
“We will keep this one” he muttered, proceeding to grab the still barely attached leg. He rested his foot on Katie’s chest to keep her in place against the wall and proceeded to pull…while pushing with his foot.
Katie opened her mouth with a silent scream and her eyes widened with pain. She looked at him, helpless and in agony as he mercilessly tore her apart.
With a sick tearing and popping sound, her leg ripped away with a torrent of red and her body jerked violently with its sudden removal.
She finally screamed once again, starting to choke as her throat became raw and horse with the intensity.
“You….you….sick fucking….fuck you” She sobbed. Shaking and panting in disbelief at what just happened to her, and just staring at the stumps that were once her legs.
The captors debated further, leaving her for a few minutes on camera. The film recorded her…twitching and convulsing as blood spurts from her stumps, her face revealing a look of shock and agony through her heavy breathing and groans.
She slowly looked up towards her captors as they focused their attention on approached her, each of them holding a knife.
Once again, she was held up. The chain wrapped around her neck now hooked along the back wall with her arms above her connected to it as she lightly “hung”. Her body dangled helplessly with her dripping stumps as she slowly raised her head to look in front of her…but was met with a fresh a sudden jolt of pain in her left shoulder.
She screamed once more as she felt the cold steel rip into her flesh. Blasting the side of her face with a quick splash of blood. Before she could even process it, she felt another, just above her collarbone on the right-hand side of her body.
The blade went straight through her, the tip clashing with and dragging against the brick wall behind her as it protruded from her body.
Her captors laughed, as they looked at her. One on each side of her helpless body, with a strong look of pain and discomfort on her face.
The framing for the camera was perfect. It faced her directly in-between the two men, and with a brutal twist and jerk of the blades inside her, her face became more and more contorted in pain with her mouth slowly widening with pain…the camera was getting all of this.
They forcefully removed the blades, and with a quick jerk Katie gasped with a deep groan.
Again she looked up and braced herself for the next attack. She took a deep breath and swallowed, her body tensed and trembled as the next two captors brought their blades back and prepared to attack her once more….
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