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Hey - I always get too long winded when writing and am terrible about not letting anyone see my stuff before I am ready so I decided to try something to shake my habbits up a bit. I am doing frequent stream of (my fucked up) conciousnes short stories in my favorite genre - snuff! - and I will post them completely unedited to get feedback on the bare bones and to get a more raw feel to them.
They will, by nature, be shit - sorry. I will try to fix the super obvious stuff as I am writing but the goal is to leave the stupid spleeing mistakes, wronged tenses, and bad writing as is.
Another goal is I wanted to do really short stories to allow me to try a lot of different themes, charectors, etc over the next few weeks- I sort of randomly chose a few, so please feel free to give me a heads up if you like this project and have a particular interest you would love to see explored. I also am trying a few ideas that are likely to be one off, such as forcing myself not to use much description or restrciting the total number of words spoken or descriptive words, etc.
I don't usually post here, so please be patient, I may need a few posts to get formatting and etiqute down, but I am excited to get a feel what everyone does and doesn't like.
All that said, be forewarned this is just for fun and to try to get better at sharing my stuff. I do want real critisim (no fluffing needed please, I can get hard on my own) but I may blow you off if I disagree or just like how I did it and am just going to write what ever the fuck I want in the end! I do think I would be interested in revisting and polishing up - even making art for - some of them if they turn out well.
Oh, and as you will see I particularly enjoy loli incest snuff, so buckle up daugther lovers. Or haters? The line gets a bit blurred!
-HBJB
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