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Well, decidedly MUCH less vanilla. I'd say, flavor-wise, it's more strawberry where I'm looking for something more along the lines of metropolitan?
I dunno, I'm very weird with written things. You have such powerful imagery that one tends to get sucked right into the story, so I'm hoping I don't get myself all riled up to the point of being let down by the girl's finale.
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