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>>3587
Last ten chapters? My word, this really is quite substantial

Also, I am not >>3589 but am another commenter entirely. I just hadn't noticed this update until I checked it today.

I guess I could take on a name, if necessary, but I don't like to pick them out for myself.

Anyway, this chapter was a nice mass of teasing, strengthening the supernatural implications, and really underlining just how little control over herself Sonja has. I suspect that when Meris finally gets... erm... satisfied, so to speak, Sonja won't be trying to pull the lever.

Honestly, at this point, the guillotine has been teased and implied and sexualized so much that the only way I could see someone actually using the damn thing is if the bench got replaced first (in a slow, sensual act of lovemaking, restraining bolts adjusted, screws unscrewed, and the wood itself blushing with a gentle cherry stain, until the blade cries out with passion) just to bring focus off of the guillotine as a sexual powerhouse.

I'm kinda waiting for one of Betty's bitches to get the ol' wam, bam, thank you ma'am from Sonja and/or Meris, given their work.
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