>>3702
Yeah, I needed to add more details. I notice that with this novel but only as I'm going through it posting here. There are definitely chapters I would want to add. Not sure if I will, we'll see how this turns out I guess. I have expanded scenes, but those dead spots? They bother me, but not entirely if I could keep the "feel" of the novel by adding them later. I don't want to be a Lucas (though Hans *always* shot first).

Let's say, if Betty turns out to be a good girl, or at least in charge, she'll be joining as a member. If she embarrasses her parents, there's a good chance she'll be a glorious dinner. :) Or a way of trading favors with someone from Dolcett County who could use a meat girl.