As another anonfag I gotta say I'm loving this. I started off skipping ahead and speed reading, but now I'm settling into this, can't wait for the next instalment. Sure I got a few criticisms (the arrival of Principal Skinner kinda broke the spell for me, but made me laugh too!), and the odd few editing fuck ups (windows blowing about the place etc.). But all in all it's great, love the girly fight scenes too. You capture the depth and intensity of the love between Sonja and Marisa really well!