Quite the long chapter after such a short showing on the previous one. Sorry that I haven't commented in a while, but kinda-sorta out of it in terms of that sort of thing to be honest. Byproduct of apathy, I suppose?

It's taking a rather odd turn from where I thought it would, but glad to see more of the world fleshed out. I still think that the "villain" is a bit over the top. I suppose, though, that is because we are supposed to hate her.