Hello, I'm the author of the Apple Bloom story. Very happy to see someone else get inspired by the premise, like I was. Very good for a first guro story-my only advice is to perhaps linger on the actual guro a little more. Maybe write it from the perspective of the victim, and describe their feelings at being stripped down to parts, seeing their skin and organs being slowly taken away.

Apart from that, I love your world-building, and I'm hoping to see more. Good stuff!