>>4303
Quote: "I had another read through it to check for mistakes. Aside from spit/spot, the only typos I could find are that "crystalize" in paragraph 16 should be "crystallize" and that "piéce" in paragraph 17 should be "pièce"."

Have fixed both of those errors in the master copy (since I didn't catch them before posting my new draft). In both cases, they got through my spell-check somehow... and the second one is really embarrassing, because I had actually looked up the phrase on Wikipedia to get the correct accentuation for "résistance", but didn't catch that I had written the other part wrong. My hat's off to you for catching that.

Quote: "Aside from that, there were only a couple of very minor grammatical issues, mostly regarding punctuation. It's nitpicking, really; I'm just a bit of a grammar Nazi. If you're interested, here's the list:"

Except for about three of those (4, 9 and 15), I think I fixed all of them in the third draft, in some cases because the sentences themselves were altered. (And 15 has now been fixed in the master copy.) For the other two, altering them from their current state just looked wrong, so they're still the same for now.

I do vastly appreciate the feedback (and admit to being something of a grammar Nazi myself, though I'm by no means perfect), and have implemented (or eliminated the need for) the majority of the changes as needed. Thank you very much for the help.