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Quote: "Much better! Your willingness to listen to constructive criticism-and more importantly, to apply that criticism to your work-is super impressive."

Thank you. I do try, both here and elsewhere, so I can improve as a writer.

Quote: "One quick observation: Your work doesn't seem overtly sexual. Are you going to crank that up with any potential sequels/new stories?"

Oh, definitely. (Perhaps I could have made one bit a little more obvious... when Twilight's running her hand over Starlight before they start skinning her, she's effectively fondling her victim's ass. But that's the closest it came this time around, since this was primarily based around Twilight teaching Liza about vivisection.)

Quote: "Also fun fact, I was thinking myself before the first draft even came up about Twilight having a "Brain Room" where she stockpiles harvested brains, so it was nice to see someone else had that idea too :)"

Indeed. :D

Quote: "Also, I wonder if either you or someone else will ever get round to poor Scootaloo, who must be feeling rather lonesome. I entertained the idea when doing my story, but I like the idea of parts getting used for a specific purpose-Rarity had fashion, Appolejack had farm stuff...would Dash use her for training gear? I couldn't figure out anything good myself..."

No direct plans or ideas for it myself at the moment, though I too am looking forward to seeing it done.

Speaking of which, here's a thought: Babs Seed, the fourth Crusader, finds out about all this at some point and volunteers to be harvested so she can join her cousin and friends in the Brain Room. And then, thanks to Twilight's experiments, we see all of them conversing mind-to-mind and wondering who might come to join them next.