Another fine chapter, although obviously I would have preferred more focus on the guro side of things. Cannibalism is fine too, but from a selfish point of view I'd like to see more of the harvesting. If you're worried about being repetitive, just try to think of different approaches-think of new uses for different body parts, or as I suggested earlier, people being half-harvested, then being set free. It would also be fun to see the donated body parts being used, ala the dildo horn. Maybe Rarity can show up in a mare-leather dress, maybe with a purse to match.

I'd also suggest less use of the paralysis spell, especially if the subject is consenting to whatever operation is being performed on them, and again to focus more on the victim/subject.

Quick question-what is the skin from Derpy's old head being used for?

Sex scene was short but sweet. You could maybe push the guro parts of the story into the sex parts.


I'll enjoy whatever you decide to put out though, really enjoying this. I'm strongly considered putting out more MLP guro myself actually, this story's put me back in that mindset.