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@ the first anon: THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING

@ the second anon: alas nope. This is all about the girl herself, anything done with her body without her knowledge is not related to the point at all, and I like to keep this universe as pure as possible, only adding in porn logic where it caters to MY kink. I'm selfish like that XD

@ Aoi Hikari: well I mean there's still a lot of fudging and porn logic which I'm very aware of XD I know exactly which places I am not going. But apart from my realism hangups, THANKS ^^
I'm glad someone appreciated specifically the relaxation part. I kind of focused on it for a while myself there and hoped to get it across in the narrative... the sense of finality, not in a doom doom horror sense, but in a relief and release sense ^^

@ the last anon: hm! As you can see, I've already done the 'pick up the perspective of a new character with their feelings on an already described snuff' thing here once, and I think this could be worked into a perspective of someone whose desire to be snuffed had to do with involuntary movements... heh. I mostly just write these stories very seat-of-my-pants, stitching together previous ideas as they come to me, but this idea is added into the roster!
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