That was easily my favorite Waita Uziga work. Not that there's much competition as the ladies don't enjoy dying in most of his work. But given that, that one story stands out as a gem.

Great ending. It was heartwarming how dedicated Maya was to Laura. Kinda wish they'd gotten a chance to enjoy the video before doing themselves in, but still, loved the inspired gut munching and gory kiss. Maya kissing Laura's stomach to mark the point of dagger entry was very erotic foreplay for me.

That epilogue sounds like a great way to give this series the happy ending it deserves. Maybe the students could use the CCTV network to record it, and have a volunteer grab the data from the archive room and broadcast it?

In any case, take some time to flesh the story out. I know handling multiple characters tends to require more writing than one or two.

When it comes time to write my request, if you aren't familiar with Kill la Kill...are you familiar with Avatar: The Last Airbender?