That was my favorite Waita Uziga story as well. Not that there was much competition, as the people dying typically don't enjoy their deaths in Uziga's stories. That said, the story you are referring to I hold in high regard.

Wonderful ending. Laura's devotion to her lover was heartwarming, and kissing Maya's belly and marking the point of entry with her tongue before gutting her was erotic foreplay. The eye contact between Maya and Laura before they finished the cut together was the moment I went from liking to loving the story, and chomping on each other's guts and vaginas from the inside was wonderfully gory. Also really appreciated that they got to make out as they died.

Your epilogue idea sounds very promising! Take some time to flesh that one out. I know handling more characters requires more writing to keep it from feeling rushed. Maybe they could use the CCTV network to record everything, then have a volunteer retrieve it from the archive room and broadcast it?

For my Kill la Kill story when you get to it...if you're not familiar with it, would it be easier to write a story about Avatar: The Last Airbender? I wouldn't mind replacing my previous request with one from that universe. A last great threesome between Azula, Mai and Tai Lee before they kill themselves and each other.