Well, we seem to be out of the vanilla stages.

You do wonders with torture scenes and the like. There's equal parts realism and fantasy while the words just draw you into the world. I've said it before, but you have a rather deft hand with writing tSade. Every week, I look forward to the Sunday chapter release.

There's one error that I saw:
It rocked back and forth for a moment and then settled into place, face down with the air (think you meant "hair" here?) spread out in a fan.