Well those are all nice stories. But they are... how to say it... dry? They don't have any real juicy parts and its just "cut this cut that" " eat meat kids!". Don't get me wrong it was enjoyable, but it lack something kinki in it. If i could change something in those stories then i would add more sex/y and stuff. Who wouldn't want to eat a juicy pussy/ass out of a grill? Get a stallion to make a mare death less painful by fucking her. Or who wouldn't wish to fuck himself or just check they own dead body? (like Derpy in her new body checking her old one). Those are just suggestions. But im going ahead of myself. 1st i should have asked you if you are writing just a stories fixed over one subject without aiming for making them into clopfics. OR are you trying to make a a grimdark clopfic or something mixed in between. (recommended reading headlessrainbow stories on fimfiction. or if we talk canibalism - https://aryion.com/g4/view/324782 )