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2016/02/17
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If you're even more unfamiliar with Avatar, then the Kill la Kill story will do just fine. :) Satsuki grew up being molested by her mother, so playing into that how familiar the incest aspect feels as she has sex with her sister seems appropriate, except that now she is free to enjoy the thrill of it.
Actually, no need for Mako. Go with Nonon, Satsuki's best friend since kindergarden. She can die first before the sisters kill each other. Remember that Kill la Kill characters are capable of taking a lot of punishment before they die. Please write them enjoying it, mixing sex and death together.
I love the preview to this epilogue. Instant fan of the nameless surbordinate who was ready and willing to die at her vice-captain's implied wishes, and of Tsukino for her perky approach to death and her consideration for the dying girl's pleasure. Also appreciate the reference to the Tsukino's past sexual adventures with Naoki and others. Fear can be a potent spice if used right, so long as it's combined with a willing, aroused participant. Tsukino seems downright eager, so I have no worries there.
I'm guessing the photography and media clubs will be joining the baseball team in dying erotically once they share their work with the world. Sounds great.
Concerns:
I'm a little worried about how much focus is going to be on the non-consensual killings of schoolgirls. Non-consensual stuff is a turn-off for me personally. I hope some come around to the idea and join the party. Also, why do the plotters need balaclavas for? None of the them are planning on being alive by the end of this.
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