>>5250
Thanks for teh correction. I've corrected it on Hentai-foundry. Unfortunately Editing on Gurochan isn't possible. I tend to post my work here first, so the version on Gurochan is always a bit rougher than teh Hentai-Foundry version.

>>5246
Glad you liked it.

>>5249 >>5251 >>5252
I wanted more focus on the peril for this story. Also I just finished a story using a very similar snuff-method in Amy Pond: Naughty Nurse Snuff-o-Gram from the girl being snuffed's point of view, and it felt sort of repetitive and boring to me as a writer to repeat myself like that.

I suppose I could have not done an epilogue, released chapter 2 by itself and just waited to work on a fully fleshed 3rd part from her point of view later, but I write stories like Ruki (non-trades) when I get in the mood to write them, and I've been working on Ruki on and off (mostly off) for over 3 years now. But with just chapter 2 as an ending I think it would be pretty abrupt. As it is, writing the epilogue came easily, but it could have easily been another 2 years or more till I got a third part done.

if someone wants to write Ruki actually being snuffed I left a pretty comprehensive roadmap in the epilogue for them to do so, and I don't mind if they decide top flesh it out on their own. My policy on sequels and other additions to my stories is as always "feel free, so long as you link back to my story either on Hentai-Foundry or Eka's portal so that people can find the original and comment if they enjoyed it."