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Aoi Hikari
2016/05/24
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Everlasting Paradise
(an idea of a guro setting based on Everlasting Summer)
All this talk of inescapable time loops made me think of a perfect setting for some guro. Cause if you can't escape and can't die (I don't remember for sure, but I think with how desperate the Pioneer was, he would kill himself if he could), why not turn it into your personal paradise? Actually, I've heard there's a mod (yes, a modification for a VN. Never saw anything like that before, but Everlasting Summer actually has a lot of modifications, a couple even translated into English, look for them in Steam Workshop) called "my personal paradise" or something like that and it has the Pioneer as the protagonist. But I've never actually played it, so want to elaborate that the following idead are not based on it, but my independent thought. So yeah, a personal paradise where you can just torture and kill girls for fun and after a week it just resets and you can do it all again exploring all the different ways to hurt and kill people. The only problem is I prefer consensual guro. So let it be not a perconal, but a common paradise! This is where my idea differs from the "my personal paradise" mod if it is indeed what I think it is (again, I didn't play it and have no idea what it is about for real, it's just what the title make me think it is).
So, my concept would be, in every next loop there is a chance more than one real person get into the same camp/world. And after that (or maybe at some additional condition like they must realise the realness of each other and/or have sex with each other or something) they are 'tied' and will always end up in the same camp/world in each subsequent loop. Eventually Semyon got tied like that with most/all of the main charachters. At least some of them must have already tried to kill themselves, so they know it's only a shortcut to the next loop. They also know everyone else is most probably not real, and if they are real they've learned to more or less quickly determine it, and even if they mistake a real person for a fake one, the real people can't really die either, so on the end in this world death doesn't mean anything either because the person is not real in the first place or if they're real they'll just wake up in the next loop. So when everyone realize they can't escape this everlasting summer, they think "okay then, why don't we try to make this our paradise instead? After all, for all we know, we might all be long dead and this place is the paradise". So they decide to stop trying to find answers or escape and just enjoy their life here and have fun. After all now that they are a group of real people and not just one, the endless loop won't make them lose their minds. Or will it? Cause as the death was meaningless, eventually it was included into the kind of fun they would have. Torturing and killing both the unwilling fake people (or should I just start calling them NPC as in Angel Beats?) and quite willing each other. For example, during the dinner while Semyon is not looking Ulyana would cut off her own ear and put in on his plate to startle him. Or Slavya would make the wild animals in the woods attack her and let others watch for their entertainment. Or they would find some guns and/or explosivess in the bomb shelter and play like paintball but with real guns.
Also, at first they memories of the previous loops got clearer and cleared, but at some point there became just too much loops to remember, so the memories started became less clear. This means the stories in this setting don't have to be consistent (except for who is real and who is not [but now that I think of it, there's a way for it to not be necessarily consistent too, see below]), so if in story A someone says they have been beheaded before but never decapitated so they want to try this new thing, and in another story the same charachrer says they were decapitated before, but never hanged, that would be just because their memories have become all vague and uncertain after uncounted number of loops.
Now, on charachters's realness not being consistent. What I mean is if one story the charachter A is real and the charachter B is not, and in another story B is real and A is not real. If it works like I described above: tied charachers will always be in the same camp/world from now on, then this is impossible. But what if that's not such a certain rule? Maybe there's just an increased chance to meet in the next loop. Then there's a chance that after a loop with real A,B and C charecthers there would be one with real A,C and D, then real A,B,C and D, then real B,C and D, etc. So there can also be loops where there is no real Semyon, and girls can have fun by themcelves (or with the fake Semyon) or with other guys. Besides, with the time being weird in this world, it doesn't necessarily mean that at the same time the real Semyon is in another camp/world with no real girls. It might be that after the end of the previous loop he finds himself in the beginning of the next ones among all the real girls, and only from their words he would know they experienced another loop in between.
What should I call this setting though? "Personal paradise" is already taken (well, so was "Slavya and the horse" actually, but 1. The other one didn't have any beastiality, so I deliberately used the same title to show how you should properly write a story with a title like this, 2. since the focus shifted from the horse I might rename it eventually), and it's not really personal. "Common paradise" doesn't sound very good though. "Summer paradise"? Though I also have a though that maybe seasons should change (maybe not the same way as in the real world), as it would open possibility for more snuff methods such as dying from cold. "Everlasting paradise" then? Hmm. Yeah, I think that sounds good. Everlasting Paradise it is then.
As always, opinions, suggestions, advises are welcome. So are stories in this setting or anything inspired by it.
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