Thank you everyone for commenting!

>>5463
Even when I first posted it in 2009, this didn't get a lot of comments. I suspect it just wasn't the "right" type of story for many readers. Discouraging, though, but I'm glad you liked it.

>>5466
Doing a search for "guillotine" brings up a lot of scenes in the story. Yeah, it wasn't a proper torture scene, but I thought a skull-fucking on it was enough of a gun, as it were.

>>5468
Now, that has an interesting promise. Since I just started a patreon, I might propose that as a possible short story for subscribers.

>>5469
Yeah, most of my stories are from the victim from the point of view. It is the one that I mostly associate with (e.g., I imagine myself in their place).

>>5481
We'll have to see how this turns out. The next serial (which will also be on Sunday) will be Omelas 2, basically a tentacle rape piece.