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Personally, I dislike it being so casual, for a few reasons:
1) If the characters don't care, why should I care?
2) If the characters are acting so differently from what is normal, it's incredibly weird and breaks immersion.
3) It's not clear why they're this way. How does civilisation work like this? How has it ended up this way?

It just ends up feeling like weird, empty caricatures.
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