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Aoi Hikari
2016/06/13
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And the prize to the weirdest suggestion I can remember ever seeing in my thread goes to
>>5635
What for
>>5622
and
>>5623
sometimes I also think "how does the world work like this?" but then I stop and tell myself if I wanted realism I could go watch the news (I remember I once wrote a story titled Infanticide and someone commented that it's uncool cause looks too much like what you could actually see in the real world news) and fiction exists for exploring the possiilities beyond what the real world can offer, be it time travel or casually killing each other. Cause like, say, in Back to the Future there are also enough inconsistencies to say the world can't work this way, but why care if it's so fun. I mean, I see what you mean, but I just wanted to elaborate on my position which is I don't want realism to limit how I can have fun with my stories.
Anyway, why I was asking all this is because I have a story in progress that also involves very casual attitude to death. The charachters go for it not because they think they'll gain something from it like sexiness or fun but because they believe the won't lose anything from it. So you can say they do it out of boredom. And when I made another change to the story, removing any hint of sexual interest from the charachters I was told it makes the story even less interesting and also it's so casual it looks callous or even like unthinking cruelty.
Now, on the matter of it not being sexy for the charachters. There's such a fetish as free/casual/ignored sex, level of casualness varies from where no girl would refuse but otherwise it works mostly normal to where the girls genuinely won't even notice someone is fucking them hard, and also anything in between, like a girl realising she is fucked but not caring for it enough to stop doing whatever she is doing. But even if the characters themselves don't care, the fact that they don't care is what makes it so hot (well, at least for those who share this fetish). So I guess I'm doing something like that in terms of charachters' attitude. Actually back when I was writing the first version of Asuka Saves the Day (back then titled Just Another Day at Tokyo-3 School) I wanted to explore just how casual I can make it, but that point was lost somewhere on the way, so my second attempt at it was Sunny Day.
Also in the story I mentioned the charachters' view on their own death is based not on their specific veiw of death in general, but on their very specific view of themselves (like Rei in the series not caring for her life cause she can be replaced doesn't make her treat everyone's life the same way), which means it is not how the whole world works, but just their personal oddity. So I hope it doesn't break your immersion for this story and you can still enjoy it. When on one wonderful day I finally finish it...
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