>>6029

The first scenario is actually missing the most vital (heh, puns) part of information, the specific manner of death, and the whole things seems just a little out-of-character for Team Galactic (I recently replayed Platinum, that's probably why this bugs me), but the second one is much more interesting. I'm not sure how relevant the 'previous challenger' aspect is, and plain killing her after a lost battle seems a bit overkill, but I can imagine something along the lines of this: After losing a battle (and potentially being provoked/taunted the whole time), Maylene physically lashes out at her opponent, but they turn out superior in hand-to-hand too and the thing turns into a brutal beatdown, rape and murder optional.

Does this sound like an idea? If so I need just a few more details from you:
The location (obviously somewhere there's few other people, so probably not inside a city. Like forests, mountains, beach, etc.)
Her adversary (If the 'previous challenger' thing is necessary; their gender (personally I find a girl beating up another girl is much hotter, but that's just me); maybe a bare minimum of physical traits (hair color in particular))
Rape yes/no? (And whatever specifics)
Murder yes/no? (And the method. Note that a hanging wouldn't really fit the scene because it's much too premeditated instead of the sort of thing that just happens in the heat of battle (like choking, bludgeoning, a fall, etc.)