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There's no elegant way to deliver a proper characterization of her adversary, seeing as the story is from Maylene's PoV, but I will keep your points in mind. I have no issue at all with nasty injuries (at least not the kind you'd see in a barehanded brawl). While actual foot 'fetish' is not my thing at all (I do actually like the aesthetic and as a characterization tool, just not in a sexualized context), I will try to make a point of her being barefoot, especially since going up barefoot against an opponent wearing sturdy shoes is just asking for a few broken toes (kinda speaking from experience).

That about covers it, I'll get to writing when I have the time.
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