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Eterya
2016/07/07
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As per request. Any stylistic or structural similarities to the original ending are fully intentional. I couldn't find any good references for Lunamaria's outfit, so if there's any inconsistencies with her canon costume just chalk that up to artistic license (aka 'the writer's get-out-of-jail-free-card' xD)
'Conveniently an ultra- sadist' is kind of a weak cliché (about on the level as 'no money to pay the pizza delivery' in terms of erotic plot), but it's still better than giving no reason whatsoever. And besides, I long since learned that sometimes it's more or less impossible to go without clichés/tropes, so this is just one of the things you simply don't put too much thought into (which a lot of people likely didn't anyways until I pointed it out. gj)
As always: Enjoy, thanks for reading, let me know your thoughts/feedback, and feel free to give some suggestions for stuff to write (currently working on two more requests).
And because it bears repeating: A 'suggestion' needs to have a sufficient level of detail for me to work with, a name and a one-word method of death is
not
sufficient. See some of the discussion in between the stories here for specifics.
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