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Damn, now that I'm picturing it, part of this is like really hot, I'll definitely give that idea a shot. (Once I finish the other requests; sadly the last few day stuff keeps coming up and I don't have as much time T.T)

I don't think a scene like that needs much more in the way of circumstances, and there is no way to really do it 'realistically' anyways, so (a bit like the Forsaken alternate ending) it's going to be more like 'that's how it is, don't think about it too hard'; you should never let such petty things as realism get in the way of telling a story^^

But I have something like this: Luna has had/developed a choking fetish for a while, and while Meyrin is happy to oblige her sister, she herself won't ever even try anything breathplay related since she nearly drowned when she was a kid and got a bit of a trauma from that; instead she's into light to moderate cutting. Their motivation to 'go all the way' is the eternal incest cliché of how society would never accept their relationship and they're tired of hiding it, so may as well go out with a bang instead. So after finishing off Luna Meyrin cuts open herself (btw, should she cut vertically 'like a fish' or an autopsy, or horizontally a lá seppuku?) and gets off one last time before bleeding out. And they lived happily ever aft- oh, right :P

Sound good? Good.
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