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As per request. I feel a little bad for finishing this one first, because there's another request that had been made earlier, but this story just came out much easier; fight scenes are tough to write. (But don't worry, I will get it done in time.)

The title is taken from a track of the same name from another Final Fantasy (VII Crisis Core, in particular). This is the first time I did a rape scene, and from the victim's PoV at that, hopefully it came out okay. I intentionally tried to leave it unclear if the story is set more or less in-universe (FF XIII's sort-of science fiction) or some kind of medieval-type AU, so fill in the gaps however you like.

Btw, the tyrant (whoever she is) was eventually dethroned and (along with her conveniently all-female inner circle) executed for her crimes in the most gruesome ways you can think of. (And if you can think of it, I can most likely write it. *hint* *hint*)

Other than than that, as always. Give me some feedback/comments and (sufficiently detailed) suggestions, and thanks for reading.
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