I loved the first story, how the girl died with dozens of stab wounds while fighting for her life. It reminded me a bit of a story I posted a few months back. I also really like how you give us some insight into what the character is thinking as she dies. I would have just liked a name, and maybe a brief description of how she looked. Some people might prefer to fill out in those gaps themselves, but I like to know how the author envisioned it, as it is the author's creation.