I was playing around with the idea of mutual assured destruction :D but i do like the suggestion of having them bleed out in front of each other. I do always appreciate feedback. I also think your right in part three having some expansion for her breaking mentally, I'm kinda learning as i go so ill give it some thought.

I've been going back and updating the old parts so I might go add some more details and maybe ill see if i can get the thread restarted with all four parts at once, its getting to be a hassle to scroll allllllll the way down.

But i would have to say it has to end at part four for sure, if i get bored I might write about Donavan's family but at this point if it keeps going i might a swell write a book since I'm already at 8500 words lol.

I'm also starting a side project I'm calling "The Everyday Mundane" where ill be killing people off in short stories. It will be based on real life situations like natural disasters, accidents, murders, ECT.
As is it will be a few days until part four, works killing me so hope to get a lot of writing time on Thur when I'm off.

Untill thanks for the love and peace out!