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Once more, as per request. I'm not entirely sure how well I pulled of Meyrin's part, this subject was a first for me, but I hope it came out alright. Also I did some research on it (including that dying by disembowelment alone can take surprisingly long, and that the pain felt from most internal organs tends to be somewhat misplaced), but if there's still anything imprecise, blame it on artistic liberty (and the fact that these aren't really the kind of questions you can just readily google an answer for). The way Meyrin finishes herself is reminiscent of jigai, which is the female equivalent to the samurai's sepukku, practiced by their wives for similar reasons or to avoid capture and/or rape if a military defeat was imminent. (And now you learned something new; also why isn't there any more guro art of this?)

I do apologize for the long wait, I was stuck with an annoying case of writer's block and some RL stuff, little I could do about that. Also I'm really sorry for not getting to that Pokémon story that was requested, but that probably was where most of my block was coming from; good fight scenes are tough to write and good guro is tough to write, so yeah... I'm kinda annoyed at myself for that, because I really like the idea; and I do fully intend on finishing it at some point, but maybe for the time being you want to request something else.

And one more thing. Just on the off chance someone here enjoys my writing for the writing and not just the /g/, you should totally check out some of my more SFW fanfiction on either fanfiction.net and archiveofourown.org, I go by the same username as on here. [/shameless self-promotion]

Also the usual, any kind of feedback/criticism is greatly appreciated, feel free to drop some (sufficiently detailed) suggestions, and so on.
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