>>6595
I feel you may want to put just a little more thought into that one; the video tape thing is a nice idea for a framing device, but you're lacking the quite literally defining part: the manner of death. Do think of ways the killer could (conceivably) off each of the girls, either in a variety of creative ways or (if he's supposed to be a more realistic 'serial killer') one signature method. (Yay, I learned something from Criminal Minds)

Also try to add some detail about the victims (don't be as vague as "girl(s)", just decide on a number; same with "sexual encounters", give a clear yes or no), like their names and a mini-description; like "Tiffany, a cheerleader with fake boobs and bleached hair" or "Susanne, a mousy bookworm with glasses", and so on.

Do that, and I'd be willing to bet the odds of your request getting picked up will be significantly bigger