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Well, for stuff that's over way too fast, you could always combine the two scenes into a single 'chapter', or maybe include some 'rape' into the mix - the victim isn't exhibitionistic, but one of her classmates just can't stop themselves and want to fuck her as she dies, and by volunteering to take part in the exhibit, she loses all options regarding consent in the matter.

On the topic of Flannery, well, maybe we can alter the hanging one into a slightly different story, going more 'Kinky Time gone wrong'.

Two options for this, both involving Flannery having an asphyx kink.

First option is like this: About once a week, Flannery will set up a noose and a stool, step on the stool and slip the noose around her neck (possibly tightening it in order to heighten the sensations) and just spend a few minutes masturbating in that situation before undoing the noose and stepping down. Only one day, she accidentally kicks the stool out from under her without loosening the noose, meaning she hangs to death, though having a final orgasm on her way out.

Second option gets rid of the noose, and simply has Flannery wrap a cord around her neck once in a while, enjoying the feeling when she pulls it tight for a few minutes. She'd use some kind of slip knot to ensure it stays tight while she masturbates to the feeling, but has some sort of mechanism to loosen it on command - only this time, the mechanism fails, meaning she can't escape as she is essentially strangled to death.

Either of those options work?
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