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Thank you for the feedback. I try to mix things up a bit, and I feel like this story would've been too similar to the last one if I hadn't included sex or something else apart from the death itself. Beheading stories are more difficult to write since death is so sudden, and without sex there really isn't much going on. It's of course absolutely fine if you don't think it's as good as the last one, that's just how it goes. I'm glad you still found it enjoyable though.
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