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Goth propane tank shoot out: Explosives, stomach deformation, large insertion.

My version of the story that me and thevistorinblack both worked on (he wrote his, I wrote mine, and I did a picture). Picture is located here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pic-106377.html . Don't write that often :P, dyslexic enough is a bitch to correct, but enjoy. Difference in mine and his is focus of the story, female crew instead of Adam's "cluthu porn clone" (joke me and tvb made after he wrote his) and more of a focus on camera work. This is no where as near as graphic as the digimon deli fict.

Goth Propane Tank Shootout.

	
"Alright, folks! Today on Snuff Testers, we're going to test whether or not, you can blow apart your girl with a shot taken at a propane tank from a run of the mill, store bought, gun." Said the dusty, plaid and denim clad, long haired, redhead named Josie as she posed and rapped on a propane tank stuffed into a goth girl next to her as she continued her introduction. "We all know in the movie, that you get a pretty decent explosion from one of these, and apparently shooting them will make a big boom. BUT, in reality, is it safe for YOU and..." She slapped a hand down on a flame tattoo'd ass cheek, causing the flesh to jiggle, "...will it really cause your girl to go boom, and make her way to the sky without the need for angel wings?"

	
"Lets find out!" She said, giving the ass cheek one last squeeze, before letting go and “running off”, off camera. The camera was left to pan over the goth girl, giving the viewer a good view of the girl in question they intended to blow up. The affectionately nicknamed "Ember," was a rather well built, raven haired, stereotypical goth girl, with a large swatch of her hair in the middle and extending down her bangs dyed a bright purple. The symbol for fire in Japanese was tattooed on her left check surrounded by flames, while a large complicated set of flame tattoo's extending all along her body, her legs, back, arms, and ever her nipples. Busty, her breasts braced her torso, the flame tattoo'd nipples pierced with silver studs, as she was positioned so her chin and breasts were flushed with the ground, resting under her and her on her front, her arms bound straight along the ground under her to a pike with ropes around her wrists. The rest of her curved upwards, her shapely pale butt in the air, and legs spread on two different metal pipe set ups, each forming a "U" on a two pipe legged brace. In prominent view was her strained and stretched cunt, a large silver propane tank, roughly the size of a plus sized fire extinguisher stuffed in her so only the last 1/3rd of it stuck out with its handle, the clit forced taunt against it where a sliver loop piercing dangled from it, with a small skull key chain dangling from THAT. Finally ending with her both her legs spread to either side above and to either side of the tank by a spreader bar. It was pretty easy to see why the goth girl, who had volunteered for this in the first place, had been chosen.
	


	
Blue eyes blinked as she looked back over at the camera, as she pursed her lips nervously, the silver stud in her nose and lip shined under the light. She had been set up on a range out doors, and the cold wind of the early autumn evening was blowing small bits of dust and dirt around.

	
The camera crew clicked off after a moment and then waited for the Josie to come back, having finished the opening intro for the show. This time she held a set of markers.

	
Waiting for the signal, the crew fingered a count down to her, finally signaling a silent “go” as she bent down next to Ember, hand on the goth girls ass again. "Alright, folks, So here's the plan." She shook Embers ass with her hand causing the girls body and breasts jiggle slightly with the motion, as she swayed on the pipe struts. "Our plan is to test, first, what it takes to destroy this." She hit the propane tank with her knuckles, causing the goth to gasp a little, the girl really unable to see what the announcer was doing. "So were going to shoot at it, with, first, a hand gun, and then, second, a shotgun. Presuming, of course, the first doesn't blow our little volunteer goth up the first time. So in other words... " she uncapped a red marker and drew an arrow on the girls cunt pointing at the canister, "We want our shooters shooting here." She wrote, "shoot this" below the arrow. "And not here!" She drew another arrow with a purple marker, just at the end of the large bulge in the girls stomach caused by the canister, writing "not this" above it.

	
"Hopefully, one of the two types of guns we'll be using will IGNITE the propane, and blow her, literally, to smithereens. And not just simply leave her torso or anything intact behind. We want to test the myth, that when were done, we'll have to look around HARD, just to find any piece of her left. Isn't that right Ember?" Josie slapped the girls ass again as she stood up, causing a strained eep to escape from the goth girl, her position and the propane tank stuffed in her cunt, a full 30 pound weight, making it hard to even make that noise as she swallowed hard. “Granted, it might be a little tough, Ember here's about 120 pounds of good old fashion girl meat, bone and fat. But all we can do is try our best, right?”

	
Josie walked off, and the camera crew set up the shot to show the rest of the crew hiding, 300 yards away, behind a bulletproof glass shelter. A set of firearms was set out on a table top near them, a man in glasses, their boss, smiling smugly in his director style chair, as he watched the two teenage co-host girls each pick up a gun, Josie, taking up the hand gun, and another girl a short haired brunette picking up the shotgun.

	
"What we got here," said Josie, turning to the camera and smiling, "Is a standard 9 millimeter hand gun. We'll see if this..." she pointed to the gun, "Has enough power to put a hole in... that." She pointed back down the range at the view of Ember, her naked form just barely visible at this range from so far away. Several close up camera's were filming behind similar glass shields to record the explosion if they succeeded. The camera crew keyed up one of them and showed Ember, wiggling a little in her roped bondage, the propane tank wiggling between her thighs.

	
The camera crew switched back to Josie "Alright, here goes, on three. One. Two. Three." She steadied her aim, one arm out around the shield, and fired.

	
Across the range, the cameras recorded Embers hips jump back, reacting, as a loud PING was heard as the bullet hit the side of the propane tank. The bullet flattened and fell to the ground, the camera crew making sure to edit in the slow motion speed into the broadcast later to make sure that the audience would be able to see the bullet impact while Embers eyes went wide for a moment as she heard it. And most certainly felt the it.

	
"Hmm, nothing yet!" Said Josie, as she checked the video feed from the camera. There was a large dent in the canister, but still, no hole, the bullet having landed between Embers arms after rebounding.

	
"Next shot!" She counted to three again. Fired, this time missing due to the long range. On screen Ember shifted, apparently having heard the bullet whiz by just an bare inch from her ass flame tattoo'd ass cheek.

	
"Err... missed." Josie grimaced. "Alright, shot two!" She counted down again, and fired. Another loud ping was heard, Ember not flinching as much, as the bullet pinged, just short of the first mark.

	
"Still no boom. Alright, shot three!" Josie took aim, counted and fired, but as expected, it just pinged off the canister again. Even Ember seemed to be unimpressed, looking back cautiously up at the canister, unable to see the side where the bullets hit.

	
"Alright your turn, Chris." Said Josie putting her hand gun down and dropping it on the table.

	
"Alright, obviously hand guns a bust. So were going to try a shot gun blast.” She grinned at the camera and hefted the shotgun before the camera men switched to a close up shot of the sign saying, "shoot this, not this" on Embers expanded stomach before going back to Chris. "No, don't worry, were smart enough were using a solid slug here, not buckshot. We don't want to shoot our volunteer after all. Well, not, HER specifically.

	
"Alright, on three!" said Chris leaning out past her shield, taking aim. "One, two.." she focused the shotgun on the tank, "three!" With a loud crack the shotgun went off, and down field, a dull spak was heard as it impacted the ground a good distance past Ember. The naked goth girl, jumped a bit in her rig, feet twitching a bit at the sound of the gunfire, bare white ass and tank filled cunt wiggling for the camera.

	
"Miss." Said Chris, frowning and reloading. "Alright, try two.. One, two, three." She fired again.

	
The camera crew switched back to the cameras filming Ember, as a loud metal tearing sound was heard followed by several metallic thuds as the slug passed thru the propane tanks wall, and smashed into the back of it.. Embers eyes went wide, as the tank ruptured, shaking rapidly as the gas released into the air in a white plum, the shotgun shell rattling noisily in the tank .

	
"Hahah, would you look at that!" Said Chris, proud at the shot she made as she watched the gas eject from the tank. Ember was wiggling like crazy, feeling the tank trying to shove itself in deeper into her from the force of the pressurized gas. The announcer frowned, as she noticed the gas slowly starting to descend, a lot of it being taken away by wind, but still, a large amount of the deadly to breath gas was starting to expand down, around the goth.

	
"Shit." Said Josie, looking on, they could see Embers naked form wiggling, slowly starting to be hidden behind the half opaque cloud billowing around her. A look on the camera feed showed the goth girl having noticed her danger and holding her breath as she looked around worried. "Looks like we didn't get the boom we needed, but that gas is still pretty deadly to breath. Embers holding her breath, but we just got to hope it dissipates quickly since there's nothing we brought to clear it quickly..." The group watched quietly as more of the gas streamed out. Two minutes went by before it started to clear, the girls still seeing Ember still wiggle while holding her breath under the stream of gas. After another few minutes to make sure the gas had fully dissipated in the wind and the danger had passed, the girls walked over cautiously to make sure Ember was still alright.

	
"Looks like were in luck!" said Josie, running up as she watched and saw that Embers chest was still moving. As they got closer they could see she was still awake, looking a little scared, but none the worse for wear. The propane tank in her cunt was sporting a brand new large hole, and as the girls looked it over from the back they could see that there was a dent on the other side of it where the slug had rebounded. They also noted that the container was at least another inch or two deeper into the girl, having been propelled by the force of the gas.

	
"Well, it looks like we failed to get an explosion!" Said Josie, working with Chris, both girls with a hand on the girl's ass, as they tugged to pull the canister out of the girls cunt. Ember gasped as they pulled roughly and with a squelching noise, finally popped it free. The girls cunt stayed open, gaping, a clear shot of her cervix visible to the camera as Ember gasped for air as the other two girls held the propane tank up, to show the hole. "We can see now the slug went thru here,” Josie pointed, and then slipped the tank, “and didn't exit here,” she pointed to the dent in back, “So apparently you can't get an explosion from one of these with a firearm." They shook the tank, the slug rattling in it. "But, as you know, we'll see what we can do to get it to explode, anyway, so please keep on watching!" The two girls grinned, posing, one hand each on one of Ember's ass cheeks as the camera panned in on them, her gaping cunt, and the propane tank set down on the ground between the goths legs.

	
"And welcome back to Snuff Testers!" Said Josie, grinning as she stood next to the naked Ember. Ember shifted uncomfortably, well aware of the fact she was standing naked in front of a camera. The crew had redrawn their little message on her stomach from the previous day, and the red arrow now pointed to her still slightly stretched out cunt. She shifted, her hands behind her back, not making eye contact with the camera. "As you know we failed to get the results we wanted, but as you all know, we always try and at least get the results we expected, if not by the means. And, we know from our research, that one of these....!" she held up a new propane tank, painted with the words "woman buster mark 2," "can easily demolish a house. So we thank our resident goth, Ember, here for coming back for a second day. She told us earlier.. " Next to her Ember waved weakly, embarrassed, "That she actually had thought about not coming back, but being a big fan of the show didn't want to leave us without an ending, so came back, even knowing, she'd be blown up by us without a doubt!." Josie grinned and shook Embers hand, "Thanks again, Ember! Now lets get down to the range!" She grinned, and the camera took a quick close up of her face first before then moving on over to Ember, panning down her flame decal'd, naked body, to close up on her cunt, the silver ring and skull key chain still dangling from her clit and the words "shoot this" upside down, and an arrow pointing down, right above it.

	
"Alright, folks, this time, we're going to use thermite." Josie said, pointing over to Chris, who was standing over Ember with a thermite filled bucket, the goth girl back in her rig with a new propane tank shoved in her. The top half of “Woman Buster” was still visible painted on its side, with only “uster” visible and the crew had recorded it, both times the tanks had been shoved in, it taking close to half an hour to get the tank into the girl. However they made sure to keep that off the air, saving it for the dvd extra's. "As you know, thermite's a compound that burns extremely hot, and can melt thru most form of metal with ease. Which we figure will work perfectly for this, as it'll burn thru the tank, and ignite it, thus causing it to blow sky high, along with our friendly neighborhood goth here!"

	
Behind her, Chris took a handful of the red powder, mixed with a bit of glue to give it adhesive properties, and smeared it on the front top of the tank. "We'll be taking this." Said Chris. taping a wire to the side of the tank, imbedding it into the thermite, "and using it to heat up the thermite, which will cause it to burn thru the tank while were safely behind our barrier out there." she pointed across the field. Slapping Ember's ass lightly, leaving a red powder hand print on the girl, she pushed the girl forward, “Just keep forwards like this, Ember, so the thermite and melting metal won't drip on you!” She grinned, took one last look over the girls naked body, and then the two star made their way back to safety as Ember was left to look back over her ass at the tank with thermite smeared on it jutting out of her.

	
"Alright, here we go..." Said Josie, flicking up the protective switch on the detonator as the camera crew took a shot of her. The camera men flipped back to Ember, her cunt and ass in the cold morning air in plain view of the camera and a country road visible behind her. The thermite spread across the tank with the detonator in it was in plain sight and the Camera crew let the view settle on it for a moment, before going back to Josie, with Chris behind her with her fingers in her ears. "Alright, Three. two, one, FIRE IN THE HOLE!" She yelled and hit the switch, while back across the field, the detonator sparked, the thermite igniting and hissing loudly as it began to melt thru the metal.

	
Ember shifted, worrying as the goth, obviously hearing the metal burning with a hiss behind her, tried to look back as drips of the thick tanks shell began to drop between her arms. There was a long dead silence, before after a minute, there was an audible pop as the metal broke and another split second of a rushing sound as the gas lighted with a fwoomph.!

	
The explosion went off with such a loud bang, everyone back behind the barrier ducked as the fireball went up nearly four stories high, sending bits of dirt and of course Ember and the tank inside her everywhere. The crew girls all jumped, high fiving, as the camera crew worked to get it all on camera.

	
"Alright, lets look at the slow motion!" Said Josie, excited as her, Chris and their boss looked over the camera feed, the camera men routing in it in as it was edited. On screen they saw the thermite spark, the dripping metal, and then the spark as the tank popped. Embers eyes went wide, hardly having time to open fully before the girl exploded in a fireball, the cunt blowing open and the tank shooting out in a wake of shrapnel. A few pieces of metal imbedded in the girls arms, breasts, ass and legs before they were covered in a rapidly expanding fireball.

	
"Whoo! That was great!" yelled Chris, running out into the field. Where Ember and the rig had just been moments before, there was a large crater with burnt soot all around it and small bits of metal. Looking around she could barely see anything that resembled the girl, but a few pieces of tiny bits burning in the field gave her a good estimate of how far she had spread.

	
"Hey, check it out!" Said Josie, laughing, she ran over to Chris, the camera focusing on her. "I guess ,the blast caught her clitoris ring and that skull! She laughed, and held up the badly manged ring, with a small part of the skull still attached to it. It was badly burnt. "And just think folks, two minutes ago this was attached to our friendly goths clit. And then, it was over there, about twenty feet!” She pointed behind her where she had picked it up. “We might not have been able to get the tank to blow with a gun..." she held up the bent and mangled clit ring, "But THIS says you CAN still blow a girl sky high without angel wings if you got the right tools... and a propane tank!"

	
"Hey.." said Chris, grinning. "Want to see if we can go find a nipple?"

	
"Good luck with that!" Said Josie, laughing. She grinned as the camera men counted down and then faded out.
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