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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Another cliff hanger. What have we readers ever done to deserve such cruelty?! lol. LOVED the chapter. I actually had to stop and let my heartbeat calm down when it got to the brainfuck scene. The only other time I had to do that was when I read your story the Interview and one of your characters attached wires to a woman's brain and controlled her.

Now, as usual, I have a host of ideas. In one, you could have Tim realize Alex is being controlled somehow, such as seeing her heal rapidly from what would have resulted in severe injuries, but treating it as normal to prevent giving away that he knows to the fairies, who don't know that humans can't regenerate like fairies can. Tim could then take advantage of the situation in the most perverse ways possible in order to remove the fairies from Alex's bodies. He could, perhaps, tell Alex that it was time for him to clean her organs(or something similar), and the fairies not knowing any better, go along with it. He could then pull Alex's womb out through her navel with the fairies hiding there not making any noise so as not to get caught. Any wounds could then heal because of fairy magic when he was done. He could then go on and remove her brain by slowly cutting open her skull. The fairies, in there arrogance, wouldn't think much of it as their ally is in a liquid state, and thus wouldn't be recognized. Tim could put Alex's skull cap back on, so it would heal. Tim could then secretly convene with Fey to figure out how to restore Alex's mind. Fey could then tell Tim that the mind control spell that the fairies used makes the users mind weak to control also. So, with Fey's help, Tim could discretely take over the mind of the fairy controlling Alex and give control back to Alex. You could then continue with Alex retaining the ability to heal, some how.

Another idea is for Alex to LET the fairy to control her body to get all of them to come back to Tim's house so they could deal with them. They could get back to the house where Alex could take back control abruptly and grab her prolapsed cervix and seal the fairies inside. The one inside her head could try to escape, but only her body would escape as her mind is still trapped within Alex's mind, effectively leaving the fairies body brain dead, except she can still feel what happens to her body. The fairies in her womb could try and escape, but fail because they don't have their weapons. One of them could spot Alex's fallopian tubes and think it's an exit. Alex coudl feel this and tell them to stop. This, of course, only encourages them. They could reach her ovaries and see her tiny egg cells. One of them could come up with the idea of bartering for their freedom by taking Alex's eggs. They all could agree to this, but not know where to store the eggs.(I think you know where I'm going with this ;) ) One of the fairies could suggest they store the eggs in themselves, leading to them stealing Alex's eggs and forcing them into their own ovaries.

Can't wait for your next update. Hopefully it doesn't take too long to get out.
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