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>>6945

Here you go, this one's mostly setting the scene and stuff. I wish I'd managed to integrate the first question into the flow a bit more seamlessly, but I really didn't find a way. The 'title' of this bit is more like a reference number for later (because after you die there will be an option to restart from a previous section).

I probably put way too much thought into the worldbuilding here already, but I just can't help it; the museum briefly mentioned is one I also used for another story already (over here >>6685). Those black wrist straps apply to anyone else wearing them just as much as the PC, and most people are wearing them, if only to save money. So while I'm not saying there's nothing stopping you (and potential friend/s) from picking a victim to rape, kill or 'volunteer' for an exhibit... there really isn't. (Please don't try it right now, though. Just keep the idea in mind for later)

Btw, props to JestInPieces for their relatively detailed write-in (which got used mostly by virtue of being the only one), and with reference pictures at that ^^

Any kind of feedback/criticism, suggestions or whatever comments along with the votes are always appreciated.
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