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Thank for your work!
Not thank for the cliff-hanger just after a month long pause :-P. You are actually a sadist aren't you?

That was awesome as usual.
To push a bit the idea of JIP, Lana could be half digested by Alex but not realize it as she is constantly annoyed by the reflex muscular contraction of Alex digestive track. At the moment of the assault on Tim, she would fly out of Alex mouth. But missing her lower body, a part of here intestine would remain stuck in Alex throat. The bowels would uncoil as much a they can but finally reach their maximum length, brutally stopping the fairy mid air. And that would be the moment she realize that something is missing…

Also, I don't know if you have planned something for the end put that could be fun to have everyone (humans and faeries) tearing each other apart and finally being forced to make find an arrangement: human needing the magic of Bolt to restore some important on their bodies and fairies needing the hand clapping things. Sure they could go to any other human for this but that would be even more unwanted advertising for the fairy kind.
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