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>>7002
I don't think bringing in some villain to beat up Pan would quite fit (even though I could easily write around the actual battle), and I'm not even sure Dragon Ball has any (sufficiently human) villains that would stoop down to this level, most I remember are either incompetent or some kind of maniac for whom it would be OOC (though it's been ages since I read/watched any of it, so I may be way off).

Whatever. I suppose I can do something involving Ed, though I could use a bit more input (from both of you).
For one, the scenario; I take it we're still at beating/rape/strangulation (with potentially some focus on her feet). From what I read she conveniently leaves the rest of the cast at some point to travel alone, which makes her an easy target, I could just make her a victim of opportunity to some random rapist. Or do you have any more/other details/specifics?
More importantly, her 'breaking point'. Everyone has one, but with these kind of chronically upbeat and positive characters it's hard to tell (and I don't know what kind of stuff Ed faced during the anime) how they will react to such extremes as brutal beatings and rape. What would you say how Ed should react at what point, and when does she 'break' and start crying or something?

In the meantime you should totally check out (and play) 'Reload Save Y/N?', a /g/-style Choose your own Adventure type of thing I started, over here >>6889