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>>7305
>I don't think I specified any rate
You didi not specified it but it is pretty clear that with that attitude pretty much nobody will even reach puberty. LOL

>But isn't this "giving too much meaning" and making it less casual?

At least for me the ending where the parents come and see one child has killed or castrated the other and only scold them for the mess and blood sounds like a good way to point out how casual the death or castration itself is.

Complaining about blood and mess only Is a bit inadequate because that reason should be related to what they did and not just complaints about being messy. If they will only complain about mess, it means that they did not even noticed what happened and it leaves feeling as if they are retards. there shoud be some kind of relevant response explaining reaction about castration or death.
Like if boy killed his sister or amputated her leg when playing, parents should scold him because they already enrolled her in ballet class and now they lost money. Reason should be related to what happened.

>can I at least imagine healthcare system not buried in bureaucracy?

If course you can, you just did not mentioned that it is different medical system from that torture industry what we have.
I am a bit surprised by your claim that doctors love children, because doctors love no one, they treat humans as pieces of meat and they could be considered inhumane machines at best or sometimes narcistic sadists.
In general doctor is not trained and even forbidden to treat patient as human being. he must be totally professional and just do his job while feeling absolutely nothing.

In general this is valid for all professionals because professionals only do their work for money without feeling anything about it thus involving professional in story is like involving some machine.
By that reason all characters should be amateurs in any fiction story.

>For example, in the real world some people color their blond hair into dark, but it doesn't mean having blond hair is bad.

Dying hair is reversible castration is not so it is extremely serious decision like everything else what is irreversible.
if they do it without good reasons it makes them retards.
in this kind of world it is mostly excusable because nobody will survive long enuogh to face consequances.

>I'm not criticizing your ideas, just elaborating on mine, pointing where they're different and where they're similar.

feel free to criticize as much as you like.
my intent is just to sho how it feels for me and probably for other people.
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