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Aoi Hikari
2016/09/30
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I know I like taking casualness to extreme levels (like this:
http://ignoredsex.tumblr.com/
) which is probably not everyone's thing. Having that said...
> You didi not specified it but it is pretty clear that with that attitude pretty much nobody will even reach puberty. LOL
Okay, now I have provided a couple of examples of how it can work, so it's no longer an issue, right?
Everyone being okay with death doesn't mean everyone would take their first chance to die.
Lectures being held doesn't mean after one the whole class would go have themselves terminated. Even if from one class only a couple of students go, from the whole school there will be enough to make a group significant enough for setting up the provisional termination point in the gym to make sense and for the story still have a feel of organized termination of school children in big numbers.
Going for a blood donation analogy again, say a lecture on it is held in school, while everyone understand that it would be a good deed, how many would astually go for it after the lecture? I'm sure most just wouldn't bother.
> If they will only complain about mess, it means that they did not even noticed what happened and it leaves feeling as if they are retards.
They do notice, they just don't care for the death as much as for the mess. Well, maybe it can be clearly stated in the story with big bold letters, but then I have a feeling the readers would feel like the author thinks of them as retards throwing obvious things into their faces like they couldn't figure out by themselves.
> should scold him because they already enrolled her in ballet class and now they lost money.
How is that different of scolding him because they had plans for the evening, but now have to clean the mess instead?
> If course you can,
> doctors ... narcistic sadists
So I can imagine a world with less bureaucracy, but can't imagine one where doctors are nice and in general people love their job?
> Dying hair is reversible castration is not so it is extremely serious decision like everything else what is irreversible.
Well, maybe taking something that is serious in real world as if it wasn't is the whole point?
I'm starting to get a feeling I got to some other side by mistake. Is it still gurochan?
Since when does guro have to make sense?
> if they do it without good reasons it makes them retards.
A girl walking around the streets without wearing a niqab without a good reason makes her a retard, because having been seen by a man is extremely serious and irreversible. If that sounds ridiculous to you, so does castration being serious to the people of the fictional guro world. It is also not serious enough for it to matter if it is reversible or not.
> my intent is just to sho how it feels for me and probably for other people.
I don't insist on you liking my ideas, but it seems you don't even understand them because you're stuck with real life logic. It's like claiming Saint-Exupéry was a retard because he didn't recognize the Little Prince being his hallucination from a heat stroke and wrote a whole book about him. Hint: realizing Saint-Exupéry was writing fiction and not a recollection of a real hallucination he had is a good point to start.
> Aoi, on the subject of casualness, I personally think that it's a good idea to have at least a little emotional impact, especially when killer and victim know each other.
I don't mind that, but...
How
> I think my hands are still shaking. ...and why am I crying?
is different from
> What have I done?!?!?
If I was that characher in that situation... agreed to play the game as I wasn't yet aware death is sad... then as soon as I realized it makes me cry I would exit the game and persuade the others to exit it too... "C'mon guys (though probably mostly girls), the game was supposed to be fun, but if it makes us cry, what is the fucking point? I don't want any more tears to be shed!"
I'm not against emotional impact, but it being a negative one contradicts with the idea of the game, which is to have fun.
It can be intense and intimate without being negative. Something more along the line with my Just a Whim story in terms of emotions. Except the part where Rei says "put me down" and "don't want to die" causing Shinji to hesitate.
> I promised to kill her with my own hands, so that’s what I will do. I felt like with the power of love that overflowed me now I could move mountains.
> Our eye contact was broken, but I didn’t have to read her eyes to see how much pain she must have felt. I could see now why Asuka thought this would be fun.
> Rei suffered like hell and it was heavenly beautiful.
> there was a lot of time until the morning, so I put my worries aside, just holding the rope and feasting my eyes on Rei’s dance. I knew her agony was genuine, and it filled my heart with joy.
> Rei had died and it sent me on cloud nine.
> Her lifeless body swing serenely in the light breeze under the cherry tree, her dead face wet with tears and glowing in moonlight. So beautiful. Even the streams of urine released from her bladder entwined her legs in a manner that I can only describe as elegant. I hugged Rei. Her body was cold, and her heart didn’t beat. She didn’t react to anything. It felt so wonderful to hold her dead body in my arms. I licked some tears from her face. They were pleasantly salty. Then I looked right into Rei’s eyes. I couldn’t read anything in them. Instead of the infinite universe, there was now perfectly empty nothingness in her eyes. In awe, I couldn’t avert my stare. Rei was beautiful. Charming. Dead.
> a sublime and sensual experience with Rei
> I looked at Rei again. The rope was virtually invisible in the night, while her body was glowing in the moonlite, which made it seem as if blue-haired girl was an angel levitating above the ground. A capful of wind made her body swing a little and a bunch of cherry blossoms fell slowly from the tree. Some of them landed on Rei’s hair and shoulders. Ah, even if there were nothing else to gain, just this lovely scene was indeed worth taking her life.
Now if I was a charachter in that story and killing my beloved it made me feel like that, I would certainly enjoy the game and keep playing it.
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