Ditto on the recruiter, military personnel sound hot to slaughter.

Also a small piece of feedback: FUCK yeah, this is right up my alley. Okay I have some real feedback though- you've done an excellent job proofreading your work and it shows, as well as loveable vocabulary. I'd love to see a lengthier story next time (basically you nailed this, but it was so short!) To be fair, my first upload was similar length.

I'd very much like to see more of this kind of stuff around, don't go away :)