So far the transformation of Susie is the best. maybe you can write a short paragraph about show how she Feels about her new form, like she’s in bliss or she comes to realize this might have been a blunder. “oh god what have I done to myself. This may have been a mistake”. Suddenly the torso stared to wiggle around in a panic, but no one would ever know of her dismay and regret.

Also next mod idea the reluctant pot girl (cheating wife or lover), for a wealth man who wants to make his Ming vase a lot more valuable. Maybe add the guy she cheated with (potboy?) and make it a matching pair of vases.