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>>7442
Sorry to hear that you had some issues to deal with. I hope that the result of those issues is for the better, than worse.

I wanted to say I have enjoyed the story so far. I prefer the willing transformations more than unwilling. I also like the more diverse ones. When it's just taking off limbs, over and over, it lost a little appeal, but then you teased us with the idea of relocating the brain to the chest cavity, and finally delivered with a human subject! And you did give lots of detail, especially to the limb removals, as not many seem to say much beyond "This saw/laser/whatever cute her arms off, then her legs off. And they stopped the blood somehow." You included mention of the bones, and the removal from the joints.

As far as giving a vote to who might have something unpredictable happen to them, I like the idea of re-including the "Host" for the theater that was "trained" into being almost completely unresponsive. It might be interesting to see if something would happen to her that would give her new motivation for life and to "wake" her up.

Again, I wish you luck.
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