Definitely have some major skills for writing. The whole long term, reiterating scene, thing is hard to keep interesting for even short ficts and this ones got some length to it and yah kept it from becoming redundant or boring even using such a simple concept as "girl in frog viewed by other girl."

Always liked that old comic, so was great seeing some more of the concept played out : ). Any chance there's more talking from inside the creature in that sequel? Loved the internal hints but always got a kick out of the girl talking from inside with someone outside.