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This story was based off an idea/suggestion by BlauSturm and written in collaboration with them. They supplied most of the ideas, details and dialogue, while I did the bulk of the writing. A collab like this definitely was an interesting experience, and one I wouldn't be averse to repeating.

Holy shit that was long; I'm sure I missed some italics or linebreak somewhere. The vivisection scene is relatively accurate (even if the name itself may not be, they only cut open her chest and not the whole abdomen), there really is such a thing as a sternal saw, and it really is used for this. Heart surgery is pretty hardcore. However with the poison I'll admit I was taking some artistic liberties, even if I strongly imply it to be cyanide it's never explicitly stated, so as to make that death a little more entertaining, mostly the part about her staying conscious this long.

Also the usual, give me some feedback/criticism, ideas for more stories, etc.