>>7797
On the subject of your most recent update:
I enjoyed it, but not quite as much as the previous ones. It's hard to put my finger on exactly what it is that I didn't like though. In general I find the lack of a definite perspective/changing perspective to be a bit distracting and/or confusing at times.

On the subject of future updates:
I quite enjoy this world, and Jack makes a great person to view it through. However, I'd rather see you write what has your interest than something that you feel forced to write. Please do keep writing though. Whatever you decide to write about I intend to read it.