Good job. You should correct the following typo before you post the story in your ASSTR or Hentai Foundry account, though.

"The blonde was impaled more than halfway through her body with a spit the size of a large salami, ad she was fucking it," should be "The blonde was impaled more than halfway through her body with a spit the size of a large salami, AND she was fucking it," (emphasis mine).