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>>7981

Hmm, what sort of details are you after?

Also, calling her "strong and capable" isn't quite accurate. Mentally, she's extremely tough, but she doesn't have much self-esteem and isn't top-level as a fighter relative to many of the others.

Did you look the character up at all? If you're going to use her rather than some OC (which I would definitely prefer), then you'll need to look her up enough to know her backstory and some characterisation.
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