Criticism, eh ?

Well, I think the title has already been used. Or at least something close enough that I first came here expecting to see a bump of an old inactive thread.

Aside from that, that's some top notch writing, that you've got, here, so nothing much to criticize !

Cheers !

And if I may add a request to the list, I'd love to see a some loli implalement, skinning, this kind of stuff. And I think hanging is a bit overused lately, so maybe avoid doing too much of that :-D.

But then, it's only my opinion and I'm not the one writing. Write what inspires you and what you have fun writing.
We see good wrighters getting fed up with their stories after a few episodes way too often ;-) !