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That was great. I really didn't expected it finish this way between Tim and Bolt. This chapter make a great conclusion for your story. I think no one can tell that it was underwhelming. In this one I feel that you have done a excellent job with your charaters!

Personally I would really love to see an other project in the vein of Berty's watch. Maybe it could take the form of some small stories?

This tooth faery thing, that could be the occasion of a remake of the scene of Tina TSA troubles... But this time the officer would probably be very very surprised.

I remember I imagined something with a genie too... Our genie is a bit special. He/She doesn't want to people to use his power to harm other people. So if you make a wish that is directly armful to someone, the genie will latter go grant him three wishes so that the person can try to fix it's situation. The genie always explain this before granting wish but you cannot ask him if someone have used his power to cause you some prejudice even if you wish for it nor you can make any wish like “do this about this wish that have affected me” or “do that to a person that have wished me this and that”. To avoid the collapsing of his system the genie also doesn't grant wish that directly harm a large number of persons.

This system was working fine for the genie until the point where he fall in the hand of a girl with very specific notion of fun. This girl decided to use those three wish to put some of her acquittance in very perverted situation… and let them a trail of hint that lead to her. Hopefully they would try to take their revenge on her with interest, using the genie powers. And then it would be her turn again. And so the genie and those three people end up dragged by this perverted woman in a lewd war game.
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